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1. Do clones dream during down time? - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Get off my RP board troll.
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.08.09 11:08:00
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2. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Kalani called out. GÇ£Shield Wall!GÇ¥ and as one the other Immortals stopped, each of them taking out an object from their backpack and then slamming it into the ground!. Marcus could only stare open mouthed and try to comprehend what was going on...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.08.07 12:40:00
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3. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Reserved for section 10.
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.26 15:09:00
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4. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I'm still alive, just been busy. I will post the next section on 7/26
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.18 11:02:00
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5. Skymother- Act one: Conversion - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Its interesting. I can tell it isn't edited yet, but I'm sure once you edit it that most of the errors will be fixed right up. But even with errors its not difficult to read. I know only part one has been posted, but I feel you may be selling your...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.12 11:19:00
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6. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Resevered for Section 7
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.11 20:04:00
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7. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Resevered for Section 8
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.11 20:04:00
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8. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
True Adamance wrote: Daedric Lothar wrote: I like it, It feels visceral, instinctual and emotional. In places the story feels clipped, but I still like it. Clipped how I would like to expand on that? it's hard to explain for me in det...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.10 22:17:00
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9. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I like it, It feels visceral, instinctual and emotional. In places the story feels clipped, but I still like it.
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.10 19:56:00
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10. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Went in and did some light editing, if you like it, let me know I'll do more.
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 20:18:00
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11. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
The last to enter the bridge was Major Aldrick Caldri. Standing at 6GÇÖ4GÇ¥ with a powerfully built physique, Aldrick cut a menacing figure. A member of the Immortal project himself, Aldrick was a member of the Caldari special forces before being...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 19:36:00
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12. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
GÇ£Our intelligence has reported that the Black Eagles are using specially modified prototype ships with a much higher output rate, however the engines also release a special detectable compound which we have picked up from several dozen small fr...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 19:36:00
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13. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Templis Card wrote: Has potential, but needs a plot of editing, not just copy editing either. Structure is a little wonky and takes time to get anywhere while at the same time saying several things at once in the same paragraph that don't lead ...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 16:42:00
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14. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Though he couldnGÇÖt find anything official backing up the report, many conspiracy theorist re-reported the sighting of the ship along with sightings of several dozen Black Eagle vessels. The same day the vessels arrived, some form of new pulse we...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 16:07:00
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15. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Confident that his appearance was appropriate to the NavyGÇÖs standards and his own he grabbed his briefing data disk and headed for the shipGÇÖs small conference room. Stepping out of the room onto the shipGÇÖs metal gangway, It was claustrophobi...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 16:05:00
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16. *Eternal - A Dust 514 Story* - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
(This story isn't edited, its all rough, but sometimes I just feel like writing. Feel free to tell me its good or crap, The story is more like a free wandering tale, so there will probably be more if people say they like it) He tried to think o...
- by Daedric Lothar - at 2013.07.05 16:00:00
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